In the interest of stoking the impetus for having the word “bard” in this blog’s tagline, I’ll post the first of a multi-part, as yet unfinished poem I’ve been updating for several weeks (perhaps months). I believe I started it just before last quarter’s finals. Enjoy. Critique.
{One}
The long-drawn poem
The descent of words
Lapses of Green Trees
Lording over dead leaves
When things move
We needn’t presume
Why it is
That they do
And when a leaf
Slips beneath
The sole of my shoe–
Scarcely a thought
Until I ought
Be moved.
Places and people
Ceasing to move
Move most
Move most to counter
The wind and passing sky–
Why slip my eye?
My eye slips away
Faster than the day,
Of course
Of course the day
She moves suspended
In the amber light
Of watery molasses
Words held in her color
Pulling the shade down
Binding the drapes across
Sun’s chariot gravitating
Around my chair while I tire
Her light sucked through a wire
Words are drawn up on my sky
Words are burned on the shade
to the window of my soul
Words tremble in the marrow
Of purple blood
Where they gasp
Like I do
Even you,
Evening too.

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June 15, 2008 at 5:15 pm
Sara
You make my heart and my mind (and my body) so very happy. More about the words themselves later.